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Thursday, February 27, 2020

poetry

Hi guys what's up it's again today I was working on a poem and our task was to make like a parody.
It was my first time doing something like this and I tried my best so sorry if it doesn't really make sense.
We made the parody off of a poem called This Is Just To Say by William Carlos Williams. Here is a side by side picture.



I have
the weapon
That you were shooting
and which will be with you
you were hoping to
Probably to get it sooner

Forgive me
they were hard
but easy to get
so quick
and so silent
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 9, 2020 at 2:13 PM

    Hi Reilly
    I like the way that you made your poem flow but maybe next time try to put a capital at the begging of the title and talk a little bit more about what you were doing and why.

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  2. AnonymousApril 17, 2020 at 10:17 AM

    Hi Reilly i really like your poem it is so cool. Maybe You could put a capital at the beginning of your title. You should definitely do more blog posts
    Other than that it is really good.

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